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Thursday 1 June 2017

Journey's Persuasive Writing - Is Facebook Good For Children?

This weeks Persuasive Writing was Is Facebook Good For Children? I need supporting evidence to back up my state of view. If you have any questions I am glad to answer them in the comments below.

3 comments:

  1. Hi Journey . I went to a place where all the latest Kootuitui blogs can be seen and found your persuasive writing. I enjoyed learning abit more about Catfishing and hearing it from a young person's perspective. What I was wondering was if you don't use facebook when you are under 13 what do you do instead? Have a superday.

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    1. Hey Dave,

      I remember when you use to teach us as we were first starting to be a digital class at Edmund Hillary School. I created this based on what we got taught when you told us how to be a reliable and responsible student with Chromebooks and our learning. I've got taught a lot when you entered our class and taught us the most things anyone can get taught on a Chromebook.

      I very appreciate the kind comment of yours. Not to be rude or anything but I didn't really get your question because it was a bit difficult to understand what you meant. Your question was: If you don't use Facebook when you are under 13 what do you do instead? That question was a bit difficult for me to answer but I will probably get used to a comment like yours.

      I just want to say something before I go. I want to thank you for teaching me how to use the Chromebooks and how to work them as we are a digital classroom at Edmund Hilary School. If you didn't actually enter our class or school I would've not have done a wonderful piece of Persuasive Writing if you didn't teach me anything about how to use and work the Chromebooks.

      (THIS GOES TO MARIA AS WELL)

      Ps. Sorry for the long reply.

      Kind Regards
      Journey

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    2. Kia ora Journey, I was looking at commenting on blogs and noticed I get a mention in your comment! Thank you. It was a pleasure to build on the work Dave had done in your class.
      I think Dave is meaning, do you use any other platform to connect online?
      Thanks for sharing about your learning about stalking and strangers. A question I have is how do you know when it is someone else on someone's account?
      Maria

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