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GUY FAWKES

I'm am learning about Guy Fawkes as the actual Guy Fawkes day had just passed.

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WARNING! My class blog has not been updated because we have a new teacher and she's just trying to get use to digital work. So just view the recent work updated on the blog.

My Holiday Recount

WALT: Write A Recount Of Our Recent Experiences

30 September 2017 was the day that my family got mindblown. We went to a fabulous beach named Kawakawa Bay.  The viewing of this beach just made my day, because of The crystal clear water. the soft squishy sand. The flaming hot sun. The cool breezy Leaves ( Off a tree of course ).  It was just the smell of salt water that put me off.

Firstly, We came to a point where the road ends and the beach just catches your eye. We also came to a point when you just wanted to jump in the amazing water but you had to get a full stomach. ( And then rest before entering the water ). We made sand castles with moldy enough bits of sand. We made turtles, suns, stars, a lady ( I really do not know why ) and much, much more. We played sand fights but could only hit the person waist and lower. ( So that sand didn’t reach out to their eyes.) We played bat down which was a difficult game because of the sand’s texture. 

When others arrived. That's when we knew our day was about to go worse. They were drinking on the work of art, Papatuanuku. Their smoke climbed up to the pleasant god, Ranginui. They were damaging our Earth. By pulling pointed grass out from the ground. By tossing disgusting rubbish into the perplexing beach. ( We eventually took it out ) We were going to put up a fight but my mother had an idea that will actually get these disrespectful creatures away from here. She said “ There is another because just down the road. I’m pretty sure you will be able to do all this stuff down there then over here. “ She had only said that so that we could enjoy our day. They replied “ Well I don’t want to move so I might just connect with this beach.”

Next, We seen a staircase that made its way into a bush walk. The scene of the bushwalk just made my day even more better. The astonishing hummingbirds. The wonderful tui swishing through the air like wind. We carried on walking upwards to finish off our adventure. We seen bell birds flattering in the Baby blue sky while we carried on walking towards the top. The bush walk seemed long but it was just the amazing birds that caught our eyes and made us want to slow down to gaze at them. We finally arrived to the top of the brilliant bush walk. We overlooked the spectacular beach that laid in front of us. 

I sensed something was going to go wrong and it actually did. Oyster shells outlined a rock. I sat down in a puddle of blood that rose to the surface. Butterflies rumbled in my stomach during the period of time my backside connected with to solid stone. 

I noticed my tribe was having a brilliant time when i peered at them  enjoying their day before it lasts.

This story is explaining one day of what I did in the holidays.
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G'Day

Hoverboards For SALE!!

This week my class has been working in advertisement as if we were actually going to  put our ad on Television. This is my ad for Hoverboards.

Be sure to check my class bog at http://edhillkara.blogspot.co.nz/

Terrifying Work

This work is based on a worksheet my class has been given and instead of working on the piece of paper I did it on here.
Hope you enjoy ;) 

Matariki Informational Poster

This Term My Class has been learning about Matariki. I created a Narrative story about Matariki or in other words a informational poster about Matariki.

You can leave some questions in the comments below

My Learning Goal.

This year I want to get better at a lot of things. I might not be able to succeed all of this until this term finishes so my goals are what I want to focus on for the whole year. If you want you can visit my class blog and others blogs at http://edhillkara.blogspot.co.nz/. 

Journey's Persuasive Writing - Is Facebook Good For Children?

This weeks Persuasive Writing was Is Facebook Good For Children? I need supporting evidence to back up my state of view. If you have any questions I am glad to answer them in the comments below.

Princess Charlotte Turns 2 Years Old

Our homework project was to find a fascinating article.
You can find articles on http://kiwikidsnews.co.nz/ 

The Red Poppy

For our homework we had to research the poppy.
All the information I researched are presented in this drawing.
I'd love to hear your feedback.

Diary Entry

Our homework was to write a diary entry as if we were a WW2 soldier.

Room 2 presented something to Edmund Hillary School. We presented it to the school because we wanted to see Teamwork, Positive Relationships, Communication. I was surprised that I did. I actually saw everything. 

THANK YOU, EDMUND HILLARY SCHOOL.

The Mysterious Forest

I've just finished my writing, yet to finish

Whanaungatanga Event

This is our Whanaungatanga Event.
Whanaungatanga means Positive Relationships, Close connections, Communicating, Sharing and how we get along.

My Letter To Freyberg.

Dear Anonymous Writer,    

I don’t know who, I don’t know why but you are VERY DISRESPECTFUL. I felt very confused because someone like you would actually send a THREATENING letter to me. Firstly, I don’t see why you think Archie was a traitor. Secondly, If you knew Archie well, you’d know that he wasn’t a traitor and that he just didn’t like war because he didn’t like to kill people and gaze at them while they suffer. That’s why he didn’t want to go to war. Also, that doesn’t mean that he was the traitor. You shouldn’t be sending nasty letters to people because you don’t know how it feels to get hurt by reading a really disrespectful letter that someone rude has sent.

There is nothing wrong with being a PACIFIST!!! Archibald Baxter was a great, strong man. Yes, Archibald Baxter was against war but that doesn’t mean he was the worst person you knew.  I’m a great young man, and I believe in myself. What if this threatening letter got sent to you? What if you felt bad about yourself? Not everyone is perfect you know. You’re such a disrespectful person and I don’t like your personality.

Archie had to survive all these miserable days and weeks on a pole with his hands tied up behind his back. By the way, He isn’t a traitor, He just didn’t think war was the best thing to do, and you can’t force people to fight in war.  Being anti-war is alright. You can’t judge him just because you can’t believe in strong people.

I feel so confused right now. Seeing this threatening letter and wondering why you hate my hero. I don’t see why you hate my hero though. Everyone has different thoughts. You should treat people right, just like how you want to be treated. If you don’t like the way people are don’t JUDGE  because you aren’t PERFECT.

From: Matt Turner

This term Rm 2 have been reading An Unexpected hero. We had to write a letter back to Freyberg.

Metaphor Poem

My Family Tree